Showing posts with label gardening. Show all posts
Showing posts with label gardening. Show all posts

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Punctuation?

shaking
the packet of seeds
asking, are you still alive?
Kiyoko Tokutomi

The way this haiku is punctuated, a person is asking the seeds a question. What if ---

shaking,
the packet of seeds asking --
are you still alive?

How does this shift your emotional response to the words?

Friday, July 19, 2013

Turning the Spade

when the spade turns
the soil in our garden --
how different
Ion Codrescu

I do not consider myself a successful flower, fruit, or vegetable gardener. During my college years I enjoyed assisting with a small garden that had an established fertile soil. I loved the fresh tomatoes, zucchini, and green beans we grew. Later I moved to a poor soil for gardening -- the northern Nevada desert adjacent to the Bonneville Salt flats. Here, I don't enjoy gardening. The results from the effort -- the financial cost, the taste of the product -- just doesn't seem worth it.  I do prefer organic products and maybe some day I'll again turn the spade with my own hand when I am not living in a desert.